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Sunday, May 24, 2009

Toothy Poetry

Long the wait, prolonged more so by mystery

Heavens have a queue it seems
Hell's pretty quick in its glee
Noisy crickets banished afar
One wonders on the phases so far
Unfazed right now, ignorance feels like a bliss
Philosophy of it, one wonders, what could be in a gist?

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Wrote this while I was waiting for an hour and a half at the dentists'. It sure was a long wait. :(

5 comments:

Maverick said...

u shld go to da dentist more often...prolly tak out one teeth at a time, once in a week! dat way u wld hav 32 masterpieces! 8-)

dats if u hav all of dem! :P

bt nice one! luvd it! :)

Stupidosaur said...

//Wrote this while I was waiting for an hour and a half at the dentists'. It sure was a long wait. :(

Wrote lot of things while I was waiting for a unit and a half of four days at the Blogger. It sure was a long wait (for your post) :(


OK I'll stop mimicking you now ;)


Hows the gum in the gums? Subsided?

I too have three rotten teeth (Though none visible!) Hope I never need to get em pulled out!

BTW are you less wise now ;)?


And you mean you composed the poem in your head, memorised it as you made it up, and then wrote it when you got the chance ? *salute in awe*

Or you just had a pen and paper with you at the dentists? :P

Stupidosaur said...

//Wrote this while I was waiting for an hour and a half at the dentists'. It sure was a long wait. :(


I wrote so many things waiting for one and a half unit of four days! It sure was a long wait (wait for your posts)

So hows gum in the gums? Subsided?

I got 3 rotten teeth actually (none visible, don't worr ;) )
Hope it never comes to pulling out.

BTW did you mentally make the poem while at the dentist's, memorise it as you made it up, and then wrote it after coming back?

*Salutes*

Stupidosaur said...

Damn, my PC misbehaved. I rewrote the thing. And now it seems it had worked earlier :P

Vinisha said...

@ Maverick

:( U want me to be a toothless dragon?

Phhbbbbtttt to you!! :P

:)

@ Stupidosaur,

I think I am more wiser now :P. That rotten teeth was causing all sorts of riots methinks. The rotten teeth theory might explain why you posted the same thing twice :P

My earlier phone SE G700 had an application where I could type in Notes, now the phone's stolen :(. So I type it now as a message and send it to someone or save it as drafts and then post it here. :)

E-smart na?