A conscious effort, a terrific farce
Matters of friendship never be so scarce
Until eternity, we once toasted
Dawn awakens & we never boasted
Wonder where we end up today
No trust, forget the love born one day
Let down again and yet again, I did feel
Why didn't you ever attempt, on our friendship, an unbreakable seal?
Disposable I be, fail to see the truth, you did betray
Better things in life lead your heart astray
I wish for a friend, never does he leave
Plenty things he may have, up his sleeve
Not through life and death, but through the bits in between
Doesn't seem difficult, for I believe I do truly deserve
The friendship unfulfilled by you
The promises broken all through.
3 comments:
sumone a lil mellow today....luvd da cadence nd da flow of emotions.....beautifully done.....dont we all wish fr a frnd who is wid us throughout...doesnt leave us wat may cum...newsfalsh...life's not ideal....sad but true! :(
hurts me as much as it hurts u fr not havin a frnd!
likd da poem! :)
ya maverick..life's not ideal...sad reality...but let's cheer up..experinces r supposed to make one strong
Don't really know if this piece of yours is an outcome of a personal situation or just a creative weekend..
Sympathies if its the first case.. Things like these happen to all of us but am sure that will be no solace. Nothing can be.
But its amazingly well written, really quite beautiful. You have some serious talent working for u gal.. Keep scribbling!
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