Nothing about this night is empty & dark
A different life emerges with a winning spark
Is it the man with his unleashed canine
Or the boy teaching free riding to his mate so feminine?
Peaceful white clouds in the bright daylight
Take on an armour of evil in the twilight
One wonders which one be the facade
Is it just the clouds or a man after a decade?
A gentle breeze calms the night philosopher
Throw her head back & laughs, she does at the Knight in Shining Armour
Predictable is the light, whilst darkness be opposed
Which of the two, embody her, does she suppose?
Light be her heart, dark be her mind
Her soul be colourless but could it actually be kind?
Leashed by endless descriptions, seems so passé
Breaks into dusk, fearless this lassie
4 comments:
whoa... thats a whole lot of beauty and new words for me!! swell writing signora!
wow....dis one was good....way too good.....awesome.......likd da rhyme scheme too except one (facade-decade)....but den it goes well wid da theme of da poem...so no prbs wid dat! :)
u wer supposed to b revising sumthng wernt u? :P :P :P :P :P
good....its makin u write good poems @least! luvd dis one! :)
simply gr88888..wonderful piece..i agree with hary.. a whole lot of beauty and new words for me 2!!
nice blog theme....
nice poem...beautiful idea depicted with an equally wonderful word selection...but at some places, the line 2 of the rhyme is a touch too long as compared to line1......
nyway, as always liked it...
cheers!
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