Something aches, through the depths
And shallow layers of this heart
Know it all I do, mend it how I don't
There is hope, someone says
Cling badly to the hope, for days
A deep breath, and soul is beckoned
What's the solution?, with it, I reckon
Let time take its casual turn,
Let destiny create its magic churn
Confused & dejected, when would I see?
Simplicity sounds the answer
Complexity acts the dancer
Break noisy things, I wish a two
Make me free, someday will who?
6 comments:
hmmm....likd da poem...more so for a moment stopped nd thought about wat went behind writing it!
familiar feelings....knw how it feels....nicely done......luvd it! :)
hi viniii...how r u? where r u?? cheers friend
Abbey I-can-walk-Englis-I-can-tok-Englis-I-can-laff-Englis wali Devdas ki Atmi, tere blaaag pe barah kyon bajey huey rehte hain aaj kal?
A SAD case?
(I-can-walk-Englis-I-can-tok-Englis-I-can-laff-Englis because of what you have to Englis in the name of the poetic license to ki...err rhyme and sound all poeticky)
(Devdas ki Atmi, because I didn't know the feminine case of Devdas ki atma. Devidas ki atma doesn't make sense. Devidas is just another valid guy name. Devdasi ki Atma also wouldn't work. 'Devdasi' is a totally different thing :P)
//...what you have to Englis...
is actually meant to be
//...what you have done to Englis...
Lift up! Go kill a mockingbird or something!
sublime!
Tho I read it like a rap song.....
@ Maverick, keep guessing :)
@Ramesh, 5 mins after you posted that comment, we spoke online :P
@ Stupidosaur, Hein, Kya, bhat? It's sinful to kill a mockingbird, THEY say. I just think it's cruel :(
@J, thank you. :)
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